Ravenloft: Prisoners of the Mist

Suggestions, Feedback & Bug Reports (OOC) => Bug Reports => Topic started by: Song of Danta on November 04, 2016, 03:08:18 AM

Title: Typos!
Post by: Song of Danta on November 04, 2016, 03:08:18 AM
I decided to make a separate thread to add to over time so that these don't become lost/drowned in Minor Bug Reports. I'll include typos, bad grammar, and unclear phrasing (or phrasing that could be improved) here.

ITEMS

(http://i.imgur.com/nj59q0i.png)

Should be 'do', not does.

(http://i.imgur.com/wlztXwk.png)

Ravenclaw is a type of bramble, earning its name from the slightly curled, pointy twigs that appear like the claws of a bird.

(http://i.imgur.com/vmp7ILN.png)

Its. Also, we're missing the word 'flavor' after 'delicate'.

(http://i.imgur.com/jWTkYgG.png)

What the heck is a 'lumb'.



CONVERSATIONS/NPCs

(http://i.imgur.com/gEc71kk.png)

Demands for wood have risen, but the trees deeper inside Itu Skoven to the south are useless for construction. They rot too quickly, almost surprisingly so. Thus, we have to harvest what we can near the river and to the north.

(http://i.imgur.com/ln2bAkP.png)

You're and welcome.
Also, there needs to be a space after 'burn!'.



OTHER

(http://i.imgur.com/QanEx2c.png)

The road from this point on has been taken by the weather. The lack of travel and maintenance has left most of it gone.


Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Norture on November 04, 2016, 08:47:50 AM
Demand for wood has risen is correct. It's the demand that has risen. Demand have risen sounds weird. Edit: I think the last one is fine too, it's not a run-on sentence. The second half is directly related to the first half.

Edit 2: Oh hey I just noticed, the first one says demandS. So either "demand for wood has" works, or "demands for wood have."
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Song of Danta on November 04, 2016, 10:15:24 AM
The second half was removal of the (redundant) repetition of 'quick'. It flows better with 'so' at the end, which required the first word of the following sentence being changed to 'thus'. It's not really a big deal if it's kept the way it was, though. So long as that 'to' is fixed. Hiss.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: dark_majico on November 04, 2016, 11:15:55 AM
The ring of warmth description needs some attention, as soon as I see one I'll screen shot it. As does the camp fire menu, it says "Throw dirt at the fire". None of my characters would have any desire to "throw dirt at a camp fire" to put it out, they would just rather "extinguish the fire". Photobucket is down for maintanence currently so when it's up I'll upload.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: SanneJ on November 04, 2016, 12:06:40 PM
There are so many "typo's", I'm not a native speaker and even I see them, I stopped caring.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Song of Danta on November 04, 2016, 07:08:52 PM
Then you can ignore this thread, too!
Some of us enjoy editing work.

:lol:
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: dark_majico on November 12, 2016, 08:09:20 AM
(http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b100/blue_eyes987/Ravenloft%20-%20PotM/Ravenloft%20-%20Prisoner_0000e.jpg)[/URL]

Currently the problem with the wording 'Throw dirt at the fire' implies that you are actually throwing dirt at the fire to put it out, which would be quit fruitless, and nonsensical. So I think 'extinguish the fire', 'smother the fire' or 'stamp out the fire' would be much more appropriate and correct.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on January 03, 2017, 02:05:00 PM
I've fixed all those, except for the area description one (last one in the original post) since I didn't know which area it was referring to.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Song of Danta on January 08, 2017, 07:21:13 PM
I'll try and find the area name, sorry about that! I know it's one of the Retezat areas.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Arawn on January 09, 2017, 01:03:36 AM
It's the first Retezat area that attaches to the Wachter road, if that helps. Goes right into the side of the long road area before the Crossroads at the Estate.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on January 13, 2017, 07:10:53 AM
It's the first Retezat area that attaches to the Wachter road, if that helps. Goes right into the side of the long road area before the Crossroads at the Estate.

Will fix it.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: emptyanima on March 27, 2017, 03:10:30 PM
Uta Tomescu, leatherworker in the Village of Barovia, is now being referred to as 'his' in her dialogue;

(http://i.imgur.com/OdOpmjn.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on March 27, 2017, 09:12:31 PM
Uta Tomescu, leatherworker in the Village of Barovia, is now being referred to as 'his' in her dialogue;

(http://i.imgur.com/OdOpmjn.png)

Will fix it.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on May 11, 2017, 09:33:02 PM
Can you report any typos in loading screens, spells, feats, abilities, etc?
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: dark_majico on May 12, 2017, 06:27:14 AM
Can you report any typos in loading screens, spells, feats, abilities, etc?

I've noticed that some load screens that have gameplay tips have too much text, so they cut off mid sentence. It's really hard for me to screenshot them though because my computer loads areas in seconds.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: dark_majico on June 20, 2017, 05:07:00 AM
Two mistakes I have noticed, Fur Lined Boots, and Worg Fur Boots. I suspect many of the crafted clothing need to be examined.

Quote
This pair of boots has been made by the fur of a wolf.

This pair of boots has been made by the fur of a worg.


This is not correct, the boots where not made by a reanimated Wolf or Worg fur.

It would be correct to say...

This pair of boots have been crafted using the pelt of a (insert animal).
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on June 20, 2017, 08:34:23 PM
Going to fix that.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: A minor Glamour on June 21, 2017, 05:18:47 AM
The ring of the warmth could use an overhaul in its description, I don't have the item in my possession to type it out, but the first three lines appear to have been taken from the entry for the Ring of Lessar Warmth from Havvy Homebrew on the D&D Wiki, see the full description here...

Quote
Havvy's Homebrew

The ring of warmth makes the wearer feel a minimum temperature of what is necessary to feel warm. For example, a human would feel a minimum of 70 degrees Fahrenheit (21 Celsius). This ring has no effect if the wearer is in temperature that is higher than what is considered warm for it or if the wearer is undead, a plant, a construct, or otherwise unliving. This effect is entirely illusory, though it feels like an Endure Elements spell of CL 3. This is a Mind-Affecting Effect.

Now if this is a players submitted content please don't take offence to this but what I feel should be corrected are the use of brackets, references to Celcius and Fahrenheit, the medical term hypothermia, and the structure of the sentences, it doesn't flow well.

My suggestion just going from my own memories...

This magical ring has been enchanted to protect the owner from suffering ill affects from the environment in cold regions, the enchantment works differently depending on whomever or whatever creature wears it, in that whatever temperature is preferred by the wearer they will always feel the magical warmth that the enchantment brings. It has been noted that some creatures who are capable of wearing rings, that do not suffer ill affects from the cold, receive no benefit from wearing the ring.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: peps on June 26, 2017, 03:00:03 AM
Vicar Miklos of the Village of Barovia Morninglordian church states that (if you have a key for the dungeon that leads to the zombie champions and juju variations) the key may lead to the metal door on the "northwest" end of the building. However, it's the northeast side of the building the metal door is at.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Norture on November 13, 2017, 07:13:14 PM
Berez, the yellow text by the meat smoking shack. Misspelled word is "comming."

(http://cloakandcoffee.ca/stuff/ravenloft/berez_typo.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Lion El'Jonson on December 12, 2017, 06:27:47 AM
(https://i.imgur.com/J2HouiN.png)
It should say performed instead of perform.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: 9873176 on December 27, 2017, 04:25:53 PM
A very minor typo and some missing text.

Maybe it's just me, but it seems that there is an additional blank space(s) in potion of death armor: "a   magical aura"
(https://i2.wp.com/mediacrg.files.wordpress.com/2017/12/potion.jpg)

Missing class and level in wrack spell scroll:
(https://i2.wp.com/mediacrg.files.wordpress.com/2017/12/scroll.jpg)


//Edited by MAB 77 - I'll correct this.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Pav on December 27, 2017, 05:42:14 PM
Missing class and level in wrack spell scroll:
(https://i2.wp.com/mediacrg.files.wordpress.com/2017/12/scroll.jpg)

Wrack is only a scroll, not a spell for any class.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: 9873176 on January 11, 2018, 10:57:25 AM
It seems that there's an unclosed color tag in the Watcher Steward dialogue, shouldn't be the part after [] in white?:

(https://i2.wp.com/mediacrg.files.wordpress.com/2018/01/potm-steward.jpg?ssl=1&w=450)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: ASymphony on March 19, 2018, 01:50:50 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/93LBzFj.png)

This should be "like acid" I presume!
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on March 25, 2018, 05:56:10 PM
I'll fix both of those.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Iridni Ren on April 30, 2019, 07:46:50 AM
This post has several typos: https://www.nwnravenloft.com/forum/index.php?topic=5823.msg58587#msg58587

Since it's pinned and reposted several times, thought they could be fixed, a couple in particular.


Quote
Also, these could help you as a reminder prior to your posting.

Discussions, arguments, debates... They all should be handled the same way.

Guidelines

1) Do not force your beliefs on someone.

2) Forcing your beliefs onto someone else, even if provided with good reasoning, can push people away.

3.a) The objective is to inform as best you can, and let them decide on their own.

3.b) Use facts as much as impossible, try to stay away from opinions, to back up your thoughts. Use credible, non-biasunbiased sources to help back you up.

4) You have to understand that your beliefs are YOURS, not someone else's.

5) Do not Stero-typestereotype, categorize, or anything else along those lines. It portraysevidences ignorance, which again, will turn people away from your beliefs, regardless of how well you put your point across.

6) Refrain from making bigoted, racists, and biased remarks. Same reason as above.

7a) Remain open-minded,; you don't have to agree with someone to listen to them. That is the point of an argument. If you already agreed on everything, there would be no reason for the argument in the first place.

7b)If you enter into one with the idea in your head "I don't care what he says, I'm not changing my mind," Tthen that is ignoranceobstinacy.

8.) Don't twist people's words and make them out to be saying something that you know they weren't trying to say. Secondly, everyone knows communication can be difficult. So rather then jumping on someone's case instantly, if you feel there is something that could be misunderstood/misinterpreted, ask them to clarify.

9) Do not jump to conclusions. This also reflects on rule #8, as they may not haveof been finished putting their point across, or they may have messed up somewhere along the line and it could simply be a misunderstanding.

10) Don't be a smart ass. Or rather, don't bring sarcasm into a serious discussion. For one, it's very easy to misinterpret something via forums, and two, it doesn't really have a point to it in this type of setting.

11) Don't get offended and start acting all defensive. That will just make things harder... and like-wise, don't say offensive things with no other intention thenthan to offend someone.

12) Use common sense. This should be applied to all of the above rules. If there is a source that sticks to only one side of something, it may be biased. Check for other sources that give facts about both sides of something. That is an example of applying common sense to finding/reading sources... it's not just limited to that.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on May 01, 2019, 10:41:14 PM
Fixed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: SardineTheAncestor on September 14, 2019, 12:38:11 AM
We were talking about emotes on the Discord and when another player reminded me of the journal, I noticed this typo:
(https://i.imgur.com/fpgoUEi.png)
edit: misunderstood something.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: SardineTheAncestor on October 09, 2019, 07:17:17 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/R9tEEXe.png)

Spotted in the wild @ Oasis of Apep, Har'Akir
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: InMyDarkestHours on October 09, 2019, 08:25:50 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/R9tEEXe.png)

Spotted in the wild @ Oasis of Apep, Har'Akir

Also, my OCD is often pinged with the 2 missing dashes on the first linebreak across all automated flavour text. Can this be corrected?
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: SardineTheAncestor on October 11, 2019, 02:22:05 PM
I agree.

Found another one.

(https://i.imgur.com/olYSUEK.png)

My friend Teofil in the One-Legged Dancer, in Krofburg.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on October 11, 2019, 09:45:38 PM
I agree.

Found another one.

My friend Teofil in the One-Legged Dancer, in Krofburg.

Thanks; will fix.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Socha on October 14, 2019, 06:04:45 PM
Quartier Public*
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on October 14, 2019, 06:13:31 PM
Quartier Public*

Quartier Publique is the canon name, so not changing it.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Yesper on April 13, 2020, 03:17:59 PM
The Knock Key's description states that it has fifty charges of the knock spell. While it is technically true, it is misleading due to the spell taking up multiple charges. Realistically, it's only ten uses of the spell.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on April 13, 2020, 07:22:25 PM
The Knock Key's description states that it has fifty charges of the knock spell. While it is technically true, it is misleading due to the spell taking up multiple charges. Realistically, it's only ten uses of the spell.

Minor but will fix.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on April 15, 2020, 06:12:56 PM
The Knock Key's description states that it has fifty charges of the knock spell. While it is technically true, it is misleading due to the spell taking up multiple charges. Realistically, it's only ten uses of the spell.

This is now fixed, but only for items looted after the update.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: SardineTheAncestor on April 22, 2020, 05:59:23 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/KzVKmUo.png)

In the Belker's dialogue, the word "come" is misspelled.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Socha on April 22, 2020, 07:16:08 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/KzVKmUo.png)

In the Belker's dialogue, the word "come" is misspelled.

That might have been an attempt at peppering french in his dialogue, but even then it's incorrect.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on April 22, 2020, 07:18:15 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/KzVKmUo.png)

In the Belker's dialogue, the word "come" is misspelled.

Typo. Will be fixed in an upcoming update.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Randalla on June 05, 2020, 04:10:59 AM
Witchfire Torch gives you: +3 skill bonus to "Bad Strref"

Dunno if bug or Typo?

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/486236706920726529/718375186143117322/unknown.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: emptyanima on June 05, 2020, 04:16:08 AM
This is a bug, presumably ‘bad string reference’.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on June 06, 2020, 01:56:21 PM
Witchfire Torch gives you: +3 skill bonus to "Bad Strref"

Dunno if bug or Typo?

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/486236706920726529/718375186143117322/unknown.png)

I looked in-game and it doesn't seem buggy; perhaps you're using a very old version, so you can ask a DM to replace it. Otherwise, it may be with your game installation or the haks you have.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Randalla on June 06, 2020, 05:09:32 PM
I looked in-game, seems like it resolved itself. Item description is fine now.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: TwoMartinisAndATootski on June 12, 2020, 07:49:23 PM
Not a typo, but a superficial addition (correction?) to an IG message.  When trying to change your height using the @customize height command, it only lists the OOC Character Creation room as the viable spot to adjust the height.  Turns out, you can also use the OOC lounge (https://www.nwnravenloft.com/forum/index.php?topic=11329.msg654333#msg654333).

Image of the message:
Spoiler: show
(https://i.imgur.com/uzNC1Az.jpg)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Thundron on July 23, 2020, 12:05:48 PM
when getting ciphered inventories from Ciuruc from krofburg miner's merriment it says [receives something from Hoth]
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on July 25, 2020, 09:28:37 AM
when getting ciphered inventories from Ciuruc from krofburg miner's merriment it says [receives something from Hoth]

This should now be fixed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: inkcorvid on August 25, 2020, 05:46:15 PM
The Blacksmith's Apron item is spelled "Blacksmith's Appron" with an extra P. Its description has the same spelling:
Quote
An appron with a heat resistant coating to protect the blacksmith when working.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on August 29, 2020, 01:34:31 PM
The Blacksmith's Apron item is spelled "Blacksmith's Appron" with an extra P. Its description has the same spelling:
Quote
An appron with a heat resistant coating to protect the blacksmith when working.

I'll fix this in shops and the palette, but won't affect those on existing characters.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Agony on August 29, 2020, 09:54:17 PM
I rented a traveler's suite at the Governor's Hotel with two extra keys, and the yellow text said: "<<You are now rending a Traveler's Suite at Governor's Hotel for 7..."

I am fairly sure that was supposed to be "700".
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on August 29, 2020, 10:14:31 PM
I rented a traveler's suite at the Governor's Hotel with two extra keys, and the yellow text said: "<<You are now rending a Traveler's Suite at Governor's Hotel for 7..."

I am fairly sure that was supposed to be "700".

Ah, good catch; it should read "7 days." I'll fix this.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on August 31, 2020, 12:40:38 AM
I rented a traveler's suite at the Governor's Hotel with two extra keys, and the yellow text said: "<<You are now rending a Traveler's Suite at Governor's Hotel for 7..."

I am fairly sure that was supposed to be "700".

The Blacksmith's Apron item is spelled "Blacksmith's Appron" with an extra P. Its description has the same spelling:
Quote
An appron with a heat resistant coating to protect the blacksmith when working.

Both should now be fixed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Waffenbaum on September 14, 2020, 05:05:25 PM
Found an error on the item "Borcan Jester's Cloak", the text says "this cloak is all but bleak". But "all but" means "almost completely".
It should probably have said "anything but bleak" since it's so colourful.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Duayne on September 28, 2020, 06:09:19 PM
Edrigan - Le Chaudron-de-Feu - One of the items the innkeeper sells is called "Venizon", presumably supposed to be "Venison", same with "dear", should be "deer"

(https://i.gyazo.com/70ea8143ab8b9dae776129f80ffa1ced.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on September 29, 2020, 10:09:56 PM
Found an error on the item "Borcan Jester's Cloak", the text says "this cloak is all but bleak". But "all but" means "almost completely".
It should probably have said "anything but bleak" since it's so colourful.

Edrigan - Le Chaudron-de-Feu - One of the items the innkeeper sells is called "Venizon", presumably supposed to be "Venison", same with "dear", should be "deer"

(https://i.gyazo.com/70ea8143ab8b9dae776129f80ffa1ced.png)

I'll fix both of these.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: manyconsonants on October 02, 2020, 06:03:44 AM
Spoiler: show
(https://i.imgur.com/KvsLFfs.png)


"Unblinking eyes of this stature..."
Assuming stature is meant to be 'statue.'
Statue located in Krofburg - The Wandering Billy.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on October 02, 2020, 10:04:01 PM
Spoiler: show
(https://i.imgur.com/KvsLFfs.png)


"Unblinking eyes of this stature..."
Assuming stature is meant to be 'statue.'
Statue located in Krofburg - The Wandering Billy.

This will be fixed next update.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Rainor on October 04, 2020, 08:12:06 AM
Quote
Unlike the processes that preserve their bodies, the ancient dead‘s motivations defy easy classification. men it is the circumstances of-a creature’s death, or of ewntsdhatocclrrred afterward, that determines wha$mmtimtes the mummy. I have discovered four broad categories that describe a mummy’s psycholagid origins: servitude, restlesness, and dark pacts.

The reader should understarrd that the ancient dead rise only under specific circumstances, and these factors often leave their mark on the resulting creature.

Monstous Roleplaying Resources and Lore. In the post describing the Mummy MPC/AMPC template.
https://www.nwnravenloft.com/forum/index.php?topic=4887.msg96668#msg96668
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Agony on October 29, 2020, 10:53:43 AM
When you examine your key from a rental, it tells you how many "hourss" you have remaining.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Marcus Weyland on October 29, 2020, 12:34:37 PM
Went through my bags hunting item typos. I'm not sure if these are ever retroactively fixed-- if not, it's possible my items are out of date and these have already been addressed.
Included minor stuff, so spoilered it all for space economy.

Spoiler: show
Deep Shadow Strike:
-"...against up against" should read "...up against"

Durendal:
-"indestrcutable" (third paragraph) should read "indestructible"

The Ebon Night:
-"those leathers" should read "these leathers"
-"embued" should read "imbued"

Heart of Ice:
-"lether"  should read "leather
-"weild" should read "wield"
-"ones" should read "one's"
-"susecptable" should read "susceptible"
-"susceptable" should read "susceptible"

Jackals' Ring:
-"Jackels" should read "Jackals" (x2, first and last paragraphs)
-"servered" should read "served"
-"the Cormyr's" should read "Cormyr's"
-"Jackles" should read "Jackals"
-"eaves droppers" should read "eavesdroppers"
-"a uncanny" should read "an uncanny"
-"commisioned" should read "commissioned"
-"thier" should read "their"

Malva Parviflora:
-"healers" should read " healers' "

Night Cloak:
-"silkery" should read "silken" or "silky"
-"enwoven" should read "woven"
-"clinge" should read "clings"

Suit of Skulking:
-"rustly" (first paragraph) should read "rustle"

Wizard's Traveling Spellbook:
-"MIsts should read "Mists"
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Calad on November 25, 2020, 01:04:10 PM
The Tarokka Deck item is mispelled as Tarroka, I assume because of an earlier misprint of tarokka decks. The deck can be bought from the Vistani merchants in Port.


Spoiler: show
(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/579382722615574534/781218267738013716/unknown.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: SardineTheAncestor on November 25, 2020, 03:01:30 PM
The Tarokka Deck item is mispelled as Tarroka, I assume because of an earlier misprint of tarokka decks. The deck can be bought from the Vistani merchants in Port.


Spoiler: show
(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/579382722615574534/781218267738013716/unknown.png)


I'm also trying to figure out where I can get a deck of cards with 4 face cards per suit :mrgreen:
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Iridni Ren on December 04, 2020, 11:16:36 PM
The Vampire Fledgling Rogue says, "You breath your last!"
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on December 04, 2020, 11:40:29 PM
The Tarokka Deck item is mispelled as Tarroka, I assume because of an earlier misprint of tarokka decks. The deck can be bought from the Vistani merchants in Port.


Spoiler: show
(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/579382722615574534/781218267738013716/unknown.png)


Fixed this, and some other typos.

The Vampire Fledgling Rogue says, "You breath your last!"


Pretty sure this is a NwN error, so best take it up to Beamdog.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Calad on December 12, 2020, 06:46:54 AM
Sithicus, the map A Tale of Misery. Base description has been left I think? It's fun to see though.

(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/579382722615574534/787283890304974858/unknown.png)

(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/579382722615574534/787283924245676062/unknown.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on December 12, 2020, 11:36:43 AM
Sithicus, the map A Tale of Misery. Base description has been left I think? It's fun to see though.

(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/579382722615574534/787283890304974858/unknown.png)

(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/579382722615574534/787283924245676062/unknown.png)

Thanks; will fix it.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: cheese tornado on December 16, 2020, 12:57:34 PM
One of the loading screen briefly mentioning Tepestani inquisition, incorrectly spells it as "Teptestani", unable to provide a screenshot since most load screens zip by too fast :(
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Iridni Ren on December 16, 2020, 01:07:42 PM
One of the loading screen briefly mentioning Tepestani inquisition, incorrectly spells it as "Teptestani", unable to provide a screenshot since most load screens zip by too fast :(

Seems like a tepestani teapot to me :P

*tags Kaninchen*
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on December 16, 2020, 01:57:10 PM
One of the loading screen briefly mentioning Tepestani inquisition, incorrectly spells it as "Teptestani", unable to provide a screenshot since most load screens zip by too fast :(

Thanks; will fix this for the next hak update.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Revenant on January 08, 2021, 10:17:51 PM
Heart of Ice, weild should be wield.

(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/465283572761231360/797303062678077471/unknown.png)

Edit: or lether thong should be or leather thong, Regardless of awareness should probably have a comma after it, ones heart should be one's heart, and As such should probably have a comma after it. Both susecptable and susceptable should be susceptible.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on January 10, 2021, 11:10:12 AM
Heart of Ice, weild should be wield.

(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/465283572761231360/797303062678077471/unknown.png)

Edit: or lether thong should be or leather thong, Regardless of awareness should probably have a comma after it, ones heart should be one's heart, and As such should probably have a comma after it. Both susecptable and susceptable should be susceptible.

Went through my bags hunting item typos. I'm not sure if these are ever retroactively fixed-- if not, it's possible my items are out of date and these have already been addressed.
Included minor stuff, so spoilered it all for space economy.

Spoiler: show
Deep Shadow Strike:
-"...against up against" should read "...up against"

Durendal:
-"indestrcutable" (third paragraph) should read "indestructible"

The Ebon Night:
-"those leathers" should read "these leathers"
-"embued" should read "imbued"

Heart of Ice:
-"lether"  should read "leather
-"weild" should read "wield"
-"ones" should read "one's"
-"susecptable" should read "susceptible"
-"susceptable" should read "susceptible"

Jackals' Ring:
-"Jackels" should read "Jackals" (x2, first and last paragraphs)
-"servered" should read "served"
-"the Cormyr's" should read "Cormyr's"
-"Jackles" should read "Jackals"
-"eaves droppers" should read "eavesdroppers"
-"a uncanny" should read "an uncanny"
-"commisioned" should read "commissioned"
-"thier" should read "their"

Malva Parviflora:
-"healers" should read " healers' "

Night Cloak:
-"silkery" should read "silken" or "silky"
-"enwoven" should read "woven"
-"clinge" should read "clings"

Suit of Skulking:
-"rustly" (first paragraph) should read "rustle"

Wizard's Traveling Spellbook:
-"MIsts should read "Mists"


I'll fix all those in the treasuries but won't be retroactive for existing characters. I'll fix a plethora of other typos in the treasuries.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Soulbourne on February 25, 2021, 04:10:53 AM
Small typo on map Dementlieu - Port-A-Lucine - Quartier Publique - Juteau's library.

NPC name: Henri Juteau
Issue: Dialogue Typo

Specifics: 'Litterature' should be 'Literature'

In the dialogue tree, pick 'ask about him'.

Spoiler: show
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/811865537390575616/814366016736854026/unknown.png
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on February 26, 2021, 12:48:09 PM
Small typo on map Dementlieu - Port-A-Lucine - Quartier Publique - Juteau's library.

NPC name: Henri Juteau
Issue: Dialogue Typo

Specifics: 'Litterature' should be 'Literature'

In the dialogue tree, pick 'ask about him'.

Spoiler: show
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/811865537390575616/814366016736854026/unknown.png


Thanks, I'll fix this.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Shardo on February 27, 2021, 10:34:29 PM
So after bashing my head against the screen for why I couldn't select it:
Type of Feat: Combat Form
Prerequisite: Combat Focus, Dodge, Dexterity 12, Fighter 9.
Specifics: While maintaining his combat focus, the character become better at dodging blows. He gains a +1 dodge bonus to AC for every two Combat Form feats he has up to a maximum of +5. If he has three or more Combat Form feats, he gains the benefits of Uncanny Dodge I.
Use: Automatic.

Typo on the prereq dex req. Should be 13. Because we can't take dodge without 13 dex.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on February 27, 2021, 10:48:27 PM
So after bashing my head against the screen for why I couldn't select it:
Type of Feat: Combat Form
Prerequisite: Combat Focus, Dodge, Dexterity 12, Fighter 9.
Specifics: While maintaining his combat focus, the character become better at dodging blows. He gains a +1 dodge bonus to AC for every two Combat Form feats he has up to a maximum of +5. If he has three or more Combat Form feats, he gains the benefits of Uncanny Dodge I.
Use: Automatic.

Typo on the prereq dex req. Should be 13. Because we can't take dodge without 13 dex.

No typo there; the requirement is Dex 12. There may be ways to get Dodge without 13 Dex (ie: Powers Checks, templates, etc.)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Desarity on April 14, 2021, 08:42:04 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/SbxUZ2O.png)
In the Shipwreck Dungeon, flavor text upon entering the underwater floor with water breathing active. I'm guessing it's mean to be lungs?
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on April 15, 2021, 08:11:32 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/SbxUZ2O.png)
In the Shipwreck Dungeon, flavor text upon entering the underwater floor with water breathing active. I'm guessing it's mean to be lungs?

Thanks; fixed it.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: bloodless on May 07, 2021, 06:46:43 PM
I'm not sure if this is the right thread, but I spotted this the other day. The item name and use are for a bomb, but the description is for a brooch of shielding. The item was found in the Port-a-Lucine sewer dungeon.

(https://i.imgur.com/hWD13tq.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on May 11, 2021, 12:48:16 PM
I'm not sure if this is the right thread, but I spotted this the other day. The item name and use are for a bomb, but the description is for a brooch of shielding. The item was found in the Port-a-Lucine sewer dungeon.

(https://i.imgur.com/hWD13tq.png)

I'll fix this, thanks.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: inkcorvid on May 31, 2021, 05:17:15 AM
(https://i.imgur.com/ct3xybj.png)

I'm pretty sure the word "hide" at the end of that sentence is redundant.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on May 31, 2021, 01:02:29 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/ct3xybj.png)

I'm pretty sure the word "hide" at the end of that sentence is redundant.

Indeed! Will fix it next update.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: inkcorvid on June 09, 2021, 12:21:21 AM
(https://i.imgur.com/6hmQnD5.png)

There's both an unusual comma here between "so" and "little", and a missing "of" between "terms" and "challenge".
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Kiyosa on June 09, 2021, 02:09:57 AM
That whole sentence is weird if you ask me. It'd make more sense if it were "It has only been a short while since you last had a rest and little in the terms of challenge has presented itself in the meantime."
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: ChrisRanHimselfOver on June 09, 2021, 06:06:57 PM
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/449400989481697281/852305418558373948/unknown.png)

I'm not sure if this is a typo or not but a five foot diameter sphere of solid gold is huge and would weigh WAY more than just ten and a half pounds.

Doing some quick lazy math I came to an actual weight of 78,939.78 pounds through the use of aqua-calc.com after finding the volume of the sphere.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on June 09, 2021, 06:11:23 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/6hmQnD5.png)

There's both an unusual comma here between "so" and "little", and a missing "of" between "terms" and "challenge".

I'll fix this.

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/449400989481697281/852305418558373948/unknown.png)

I'm not sure if this is a typo or not but a five foot diameter sphere of solid gold is huge and would weigh WAY more than just ten and a half pounds.

Doing some quick lazy math I came to an actual weight of 78,939.78 pounds through the use of aqua-calc.com after finding the volume of the sphere.

Fantasy gold is lighter than real gold. After all, some characters walk around with millions of gold pieces on their person. ;)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: manyconsonants on August 13, 2021, 10:27:09 AM
(https://i.imgur.com/XxbX712.png)

This text is displayed upon entering the Vallaki City Jail. Occasionally is misspelled.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on August 14, 2021, 08:43:41 AM
(https://i.imgur.com/XxbX712.png)

This text is displayed upon entering the Vallaki City Jail. Occasionally is misspelled.

Thanks; I'll fix this one and a few others in the citadel.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Iolantir on August 31, 2021, 10:23:40 PM
I can't believe it took me this long to notice this, but..


(https://i.imgur.com/Ldh7Mp9.png)

"carry" should be "carries." This is going down into the lower catacombs of the ML crypt in the Outskirts.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on September 02, 2021, 07:54:22 PM
I can't believe it took me this long to notice this, but..


(https://i.imgur.com/Ldh7Mp9.png)

"carry" should be "carries." This is going down into the lower catacombs of the ML crypt in the Outskirts.

This, and a couple of other typos in the area have been fixed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: herkles on January 16, 2022, 09:59:26 AM
The Text for Widows Heather the herb seems to be wrong, the accent marks are not getting accepted upon the item. specifically instead of saying Montbéliard it says, MontbÃ@laird. This only affects the Herb, the bush is fine.


Bush's text
(https://i.imgur.com/Cac0nqZ.jpg)

Herb's text
(https://i.imgur.com/GI4H72L.jpg)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Nezmith on January 16, 2022, 10:17:26 AM
I've held off on reporting this one for awhile because the dungeon is so old I figured the team was already aware, but the ghosts that spawn past the halls of blood in the Lich Tower have their names misspelled. An individual ghost is called a 'Barovian Peasent' instead of the proper spelling, 'Barovian Peasant'

(https://i.imgur.com/j8YBu0f.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on January 16, 2022, 11:30:30 AM
The Text for Widows Heather the herb seems to be wrong, the accent marks are not getting accepted upon the item. specifically instead of saying Montbéliard it says, MontbÃ@laird. This only affects the Herb, the bush is fine.

I've held off on reporting this one for awhile because the dungeon is so old I figured the team was already aware, but the ghosts that spawn past the halls of blood in the Lich Tower have their names misspelled. An individual ghost is called a 'Barovian Peasent' instead of the proper spelling, 'Barovian Peasant'

I'll fix both. Thanks.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: inkcorvid on January 23, 2022, 05:21:54 PM
Location: Village of Barovia - Svalich Woods Northeast

(https://i.imgur.com/q7l5lU0.png)

Is it meant to be "Sorceror", or should it be "Sorcerer"?
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on January 23, 2022, 05:34:29 PM
Location: Village of Barovia - Svalich Woods Northeast

(https://i.imgur.com/q7l5lU0.png)

Is it meant to be "Sorceror", or should it be "Sorcerer"?

Should be sorcerer. I'll fix this.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: inkcorvid on January 24, 2022, 04:08:43 PM
Treasury item: Bar-ethel

(https://i.imgur.com/r7aZ0tq.png)

"distance past"
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Ryujin on January 25, 2022, 03:41:26 AM
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/926888251657187348/935454198500315166/unknown.png)

"Tiem" should be "Item"
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on January 25, 2022, 12:47:33 PM
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/926888251657187348/935454198500315166/unknown.png)

"Tiem" should be "Item"

Treasury item: Bar-ethel

(https://i.imgur.com/r7aZ0tq.png)

"distance past"

Thanks, I'll fix those.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: softdrink on January 25, 2022, 10:21:31 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/v9BNbxs.png)

Couple of spelling mistakes on the visages at the church in Ghastria.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on January 27, 2022, 06:00:38 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/v9BNbxs.png)

Couple of spelling mistakes on the visages at the church in Ghastria.

Thanks, I'll fix that one.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Neuwwwo on April 09, 2022, 04:40:37 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/nhSQ7kq.png)

There's two unnecessary dots on this mist encounter flavor text.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Death on April 09, 2022, 05:22:01 PM
I'd look at that as an elipses but it's got two out of three periods, at least that's what I think the intent was.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: bloodless on May 02, 2022, 04:50:57 PM
Something's going on with this description.

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/798665194028269618/970788657453727785/unknown.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on May 03, 2022, 08:03:42 AM
Something's going on with this description.

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/798665194028269618/970788657453727785/unknown.png)

I'll fix this, thanks.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: DM Erebus on May 03, 2022, 11:21:28 AM
(https://i.imgur.com/nhSQ7kq.png)

There's two unnecessary dots on this mist encounter flavor text.

It's not unnecessary, it's stylish. The two-dot ellipsis stays.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: bloodless on May 06, 2022, 12:58:09 PM
Another one with the strange thingie.

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/798665194028269618/972180258285580339/unknown.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on May 07, 2022, 09:45:01 AM
Another one with the strange thingie.

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/798665194028269618/972180258285580339/unknown.png)

I'll fix that one too; thanks for reporting it.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Abear on May 12, 2022, 12:25:40 AM
(https://i.gyazo.com/fa547b012a68fab08cab8595583a934f.png)

"...shaman's simple assertion si that the..."
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on May 14, 2022, 04:57:08 PM
(https://i.gyazo.com/fa547b012a68fab08cab8595583a934f.png)

"...shaman's simple assertion si that the..."

This should now be fixed, along with the aforementioned typo's.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: ChrisRanHimselfOver on May 15, 2022, 11:56:58 PM
This is from the new dungeon so I'll hide the screenshot behind a spoiler.

Spoiler: show
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/814234835278364692/975606867285913670/unknown.png)

I believe purifying here should be putrefying.


Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on May 17, 2022, 07:20:56 PM
This is from the new dungeon so I'll hide the screenshot behind a spoiler.

Spoiler: show
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/814234835278364692/975606867285913670/unknown.png)

I believe purifying here should be putrefying.


We'll fix this, thanks.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: inkcorvid on May 25, 2022, 11:43:10 AM
"and  feet"

(https://i.imgur.com/JjTQrpd.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on May 25, 2022, 07:04:53 PM
"and  feet"

(https://i.imgur.com/JjTQrpd.png)

I'll fix this. Thanks!
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on May 26, 2022, 12:32:06 PM
"and  feet"

(https://i.imgur.com/JjTQrpd.png)

Quote
This is from the new dungeon so I'll hide the screenshot behind a spoiler.

These should now both be fixed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Abear on May 30, 2022, 12:32:23 AM
(https://i.gyazo.com/b7aaa1f3567ed4d13f1be4ca565fef4b.png)

Seems like there should be a 'to' between 'close' and 'the'.

(https://i.gyazo.com/de151f2bd09d4e128b0adffbd8ce2f43.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Madame Trousers Son on May 30, 2022, 05:58:01 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/00YeTh2.png)

"mentioned"

"felons"

"apprehended"

Not a typo per se, but it's a bit inconsistent with server lore to point people at the Captains, since usually speaking the Captain NPCs are kind of a big deal and even Gendarme PCs are lucky to see one. Perhaps replace "either of the Captains" with "an officer"?
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on May 30, 2022, 08:00:00 PM
Spoiler: show
(https://i.gyazo.com/b7aaa1f3567ed4d13f1be4ca565fef4b.png)

Seems like there should be a 'to' between 'close' and 'the'.

Spoiler: show
(https://i.imgur.com/00YeTh2.png)

"mentioned"

"felons"

"apprehended"

Not a typo per se, but it's a bit inconsistent with server lore to point people at the Captains, since usually speaking the Captain NPCs are kind of a big deal and even Gendarme PCs are lucky to see one. Perhaps replace "either of the Captains" with "an officer"?

I'll fix both of these.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: remnar on May 31, 2022, 07:30:48 PM
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/841751252756332555/981338778662731806/unknown.png)

typo in the second paragraph - I don't think Agiony is correct.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: bloodless on June 01, 2022, 07:17:10 AM
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/798665194028269618/981516518196125696/unknown.png)

There seems to be an extra empty space between now and 12.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on June 01, 2022, 01:07:11 PM
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/798665194028269618/981516518196125696/unknown.png)

There seems to be an extra empty space between now and 12.

I'll fix this.

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/841751252756332555/981338778662731806/unknown.png)

typo in the second paragraph - I don't think Agiony is correct.

Where did you get that?
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Dardonas on June 01, 2022, 01:09:00 PM
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/841751252756332555/981338778662731806/unknown.png)

typo in the second paragraph - I don't think Agiony is correct.

Where did you get that?

I'm fairly certain those are the remnants of a custom items created from several NCEs ago, not a droppable item in the treasury.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: remnar on June 01, 2022, 01:21:24 PM
a character showed me the item, i didnt know if it was special or not
so probably a DM plot item
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Abear on July 01, 2022, 02:30:37 PM
(https://i.gyazo.com/f652f3b93d2d59b28334c27e7f9af3cb.png)

Looks like the end quotation marks were left out here.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Anarcoplayba on July 01, 2022, 03:04:04 PM
Not truly a Typo, but something that pains me everytime:

In Blaustein, the rope to the shipwreck prompts you to click again to descend in both coils of rope (when you are down and trying to ascend, they prompt you to click again to descend too).
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: DM Erebus on July 01, 2022, 04:36:35 PM
Not truly a Typo, but something that pains me everytime:

In Blaustein, the rope to the shipwreck prompts you to click again to descend in both coils of rope (when you are down and trying to ascend, they prompt you to click again to descend too).

I'll put this on my to-do list
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on July 01, 2022, 10:07:45 PM
(https://i.gyazo.com/f652f3b93d2d59b28334c27e7f9af3cb.png)

Looks like the end quotation marks were left out here.

I'll fix this.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on July 07, 2022, 11:59:24 PM
(https://i.gyazo.com/f652f3b93d2d59b28334c27e7f9af3cb.png)

Looks like the end quotation marks were left out here.

This should now be fixed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: inkcorvid on July 10, 2022, 06:50:05 PM
Barovia - Mount Baratak - Underground Ruins

(https://i.imgur.com/Kh5QHCy.png)

Some errant "|"s
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on July 18, 2022, 08:31:34 AM
Barovia - Mount Baratak - Underground Ruins

(https://i.imgur.com/Kh5QHCy.png)

Some errant "|"s

I'll fix this. Thanks!
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: apeppertoo on September 30, 2022, 04:20:58 PM
(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/640228502406299662/1023688354451173397/unknown.png)

Not really a typo, but awkwardly worded. First "striking" could be changed to another adjective or omitted entirely.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on October 05, 2022, 08:16:51 PM
(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/640228502406299662/1023688354451173397/unknown.png)

Not really a typo, but awkwardly worded. First "striking" could be changed to another adjective or omitted entirely.

This has been changed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Zasaruth on October 09, 2022, 11:27:17 AM
(https://i.imgur.com/OBghXBN.png)

Should be Rhul-Thaun not Rhul-Taun on character sheet.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on October 09, 2022, 02:51:49 PM
I'll correct that, thanks for reporting it.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Ringnar on October 14, 2022, 08:21:06 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/xL7SZcL.jpg)

Tail should be Tall I believe, also a failed line break, and or missing period? Just read the red section!
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on October 15, 2022, 12:48:49 PM
Tail should be Tall I believe, also a failed line break, and or missing period? Just read the red section!

I'll fix this next hak update.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: remnar on October 25, 2022, 12:48:41 PM
goblins got some bits in their descriptions

(https://i.imgur.com/vN6XVDE.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: She Said Destroy on October 27, 2022, 08:26:50 AM
Mad Dog Rattok's yellow text is missing a dot at the end. It shows up when you follow the [Ask for healing] dialogue options.
(https://i.imgur.com/a6XuYeG.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on October 27, 2022, 08:56:12 PM
goblins got some bits in their descriptions

Quote
Mad Dog Rattok's yellow text is missing a dot at the end. It shows up when you follow the [Ask for healing] dialogue options.

I'll fix both.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on November 07, 2022, 09:46:03 AM
goblins got some bits in their descriptions

Quote
Mad Dog Rattok's yellow text is missing a dot at the end. It shows up when you follow the [Ask for healing] dialogue options.


These should now be fixed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: She Said Destroy on November 12, 2022, 09:07:01 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/MpCEVx9.png)

Crawling claws have squares in their description.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on November 13, 2022, 03:07:41 PM
Crawling claws have squares in their description.

Thanks, will fix in the next update.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on November 19, 2022, 09:48:47 AM
Crawling claws have squares in their description.

Thanks, will fix in the next update.

This should now be fixed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: inkcorvid on December 11, 2022, 10:51:21 AM
The text here seems to be truncated:

(https://i.imgur.com/bwH7bjl.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on December 16, 2022, 12:44:18 PM
The text here seems to be truncated:

(https://i.imgur.com/bwH7bjl.png)

I'll shorten that load screen; please report other problematic ones.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Cakies on January 03, 2023, 08:52:09 AM
In the Musee du Port-A-Lucine on the second floor, there's a typo for the panel of paintings.

Instead of 'Second Panel' for the title of the attached painting, it says 'First Panel'.

(https://i.imgur.com/XOJfgNO.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on January 04, 2023, 03:17:05 PM
In the Musee du Port-A-Lucine on the second floor, there's a typo for the panel of paintings.

Instead of 'Second Panel' for the title of the attached painting, it says 'First Panel'.

(https://i.imgur.com/XOJfgNO.png)

I'll fix this; thanks for reporting it.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: cheese tornado on January 18, 2023, 12:13:39 AM
One of the loadscreens cuts off in text at the end, not sure if this is due to my resolution of my screen, and neither is it quite a typo, but it's a text-problem.

(https://i.imgur.com/ecZV7eA.jpg)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on January 18, 2023, 06:30:52 PM
One of the loadscreens cuts off in text at the end, not sure if this is due to my resolution of my screen, and neither is it quite a typo, but it's a text-problem.

(https://i.imgur.com/ecZV7eA.jpg)

Thanks; will fix it next hak update.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Grendlykins, Simp of Azalin Rex on January 24, 2023, 10:58:05 AM
The Ancient Dire Rhinoceros and Dire Rhinoceros descriptions have erroneous symbols in them, presumably an artefact from copy/pasting descriptions with line breaks or something.

(https://i.imgur.com/x0TTAIn.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on January 24, 2023, 08:04:34 PM
The Ancient Dire Rhinoceros and Dire Rhinoceros descriptions have erroneous symbols in them, presumably an artefact from copy/pasting descriptions with line breaks or something.

(https://i.imgur.com/x0TTAIn.png)

I'll fix this, thanks for the report.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: cooachlyfe on January 26, 2023, 12:39:31 AM
Ring of Arcane Supremacy says it gives a ninth slot in the description when it actually gives a sixth

(https://i.imgur.com/11D2y6K.jpg)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on January 29, 2023, 10:46:59 PM
Ring of Arcane Supremacy says it gives a ninth slot in the description when it actually gives a sixth

(https://i.imgur.com/11D2y6K.jpg)

This was already fixed in the treasuries, though existing ones weren't adjusted.

Quote
The Ancient Dire Rhinoceros and Dire Rhinoceros descriptions have erroneous symbols in them, presumably an artefact from copy/pasting descriptions with line breaks or something.

These have been fixed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: apeppertoo on February 03, 2023, 07:42:30 PM
(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/640228502406299662/1023688354451173397/unknown.png)

Not really a typo, but awkwardly worded. First "striking" could be changed to another adjective or omitted entirely.

This has been changed.

Sadly, it appears not to be changed in all instances of d'Honaire on the palette. From today, February 3rd 2023.

(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/640228502406299662/1071228387781259304/image.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Maffa on February 04, 2023, 03:22:56 AM
D'Hon D'Hon is striking.

Not two ways about that.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on February 06, 2023, 08:12:06 PM
Sadly, it appears not to be changed in all instances of d'Honaire on the palette. From today, February 3rd 2023.


Uhh, I'll fix it for good this time. Thanks.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: remnar on February 08, 2023, 06:02:38 PM
I HAVE FOUND A TYPO IN THE FORUMS!!!!

(https://i.imgur.com/8wnN0Lz.png)

I do not believe that this is correct grammar, 'that the it' should most likely be 'that it'!!!!
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on February 11, 2023, 03:13:40 PM
Sadly, it appears not to be changed in all instances of d'Honaire on the palette. From today, February 3rd 2023.


Quote
I do not believe that this is correct grammar, 'that the it' should most likely be 'that it'!!!!

These should now be fixed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Maiyannah on February 12, 2023, 01:12:17 PM
Entering the orphanage cellar:

(https://i.imgur.com/DcUuxP4.png)

The ! at the beginning of line 3 is spurious, and likely meant to be a linebreak
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on February 13, 2023, 12:44:18 PM
Entering the orphanage cellar:

(https://i.imgur.com/DcUuxP4.png)

The ! at the beginning of line 3 is spurious, and likely meant to be a linebreak

I'll fix this next update, thanks for reporting it.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Grendlykins, Simp of Azalin Rex on February 18, 2023, 06:45:06 AM
NPC Cemiyet, located in Hazlan - Den Fohrenvaerendman - Hospice, has the following text;

(https://i.imgur.com/qSM2ocq.png)

Her final sentence should use 'from' rather than 'form'.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on February 18, 2023, 01:19:31 PM
NPC Cemiyet, located in Hazlan - Den Fohrenvaerendman - Hospice, has the following text;

(https://i.imgur.com/qSM2ocq.png)

Her final sentence should use 'from' rather than 'form'.

Thanks, I'll fix this.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on February 19, 2023, 02:31:59 PM
NPC Cemiyet, located in Hazlan - Den Fohrenvaerendman - Hospice, has the following text;

(https://i.imgur.com/qSM2ocq.png)

Her final sentence should use 'from' rather than 'form'.

Entering the orphanage cellar:

(https://i.imgur.com/DcUuxP4.png)

The ! at the beginning of line 3 is spurious, and likely meant to be a linebreak

These should both be fixed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: remnar on March 02, 2023, 01:34:51 AM
tears of lethe item says 'pecular' at the end instead of 'peculiar'

(https://i.imgur.com/SugYveD.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on March 02, 2023, 09:38:28 AM
tears of lethe item says 'pecular' at the end instead of 'peculiar'

(https://i.imgur.com/SugYveD.png)

I'll fix this. Thanks for reporting it.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Wilkins1952 on March 04, 2023, 01:48:31 AM
Spoiler: show
(https://i.imgur.com/LBVbLaz.png)


Lorelei is mispelled as Lorelai in Gwerydd's dialogue
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on March 04, 2023, 12:57:51 PM
Spoiler: show
(https://i.imgur.com/LBVbLaz.png)


Lorelei is mispelled as Lorelai in Gwerydd's dialogue

Thanks, I'll fix that one too.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on March 06, 2023, 09:59:28 PM
tears of lethe item says 'pecular' at the end instead of 'peculiar'

Lorelei is mispelled as Lorelai in Gwerydd's dialogue

These should now be fixed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Day Old Bread on March 08, 2023, 10:13:37 PM
very minor thing but the forum entry on Rokushima Taiyoo has a section on "foreign weapons" that makes my eyes bleed. I'm sure there are others who actually have visual issues who probably find this equally agonizing to look at. Maybe we can change the coloring?

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/718284794382778448/1083225502409560075/image.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Maiyannah on March 09, 2023, 05:43:59 AM
I literally cant read that lol
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: MAB77 on March 10, 2023, 10:31:00 AM
Fixed it.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Silence is Violence on March 11, 2023, 08:06:21 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/yuJeU2N.png)

The description of the lead lined helmet says conveniantly instead of conveniently.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on March 12, 2023, 02:45:28 PM
The description of the lead lined helmet says conveniantly instead of conveniently.

I'll fix this, thanks.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: bloodless on March 16, 2023, 05:03:18 PM
A repetition more so than a typo. In the Blooming Rose, Quartier Savant.

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/798665194028269618/1086031782920593469/image.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on March 17, 2023, 01:05:56 PM
A repetition more so than a typo. In the Blooming Rose, Quartier Savant.

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/798665194028269618/1086031782920593469/image.png)

Thanks; I'll remove the repetition.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on March 19, 2023, 09:25:04 AM
The description of the lead lined helmet says conveniantly instead of conveniently.

A repetition more so than a typo. In the Blooming Rose, Quartier Savant.

These should both be fixed, although not retroactively for the helmet.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: VoraciousD on March 25, 2023, 04:51:20 AM
The witch doctor by the herbalist stations at The Drain, if asked to heal you, will pull out a 'scapel' instead of a 'scaLpel'.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on March 25, 2023, 09:41:02 AM
The witch doctor by the herbalist stations at The Drain, if asked to heal you, will pull out a 'scapel' instead of a 'scaLpel'.

I'll fix this, thanks.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: softdrink on March 27, 2023, 04:04:11 AM
Khnumhotep in Har'Akir seems to have Magic misspelled in his dialogue explaining the Magi of Har'Akir

(https://i.imgur.com/m4KA9ny.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: softdrink on March 27, 2023, 04:44:32 AM
Found another in the description of Biting Current. Two Ds at the end of learned.

(https://i.imgur.com/zDDrIb3.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Silence is Violence on March 29, 2023, 05:21:45 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/6jMUhsh.png)

There's an unnecessary space in the last paragraph.
Code: [Select]
and shun the temptations of the Legion, "
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on March 29, 2023, 08:42:52 PM
There's an unnecessary space in the last paragraph.
Code: [Select]
and shun the temptations of the Legion, "

Found another in the description of Biting Current. Two Ds at the end of learned.

Khnumhotep in Har'Akir seems to have Magic misspelled in his dialogue explaining the Magi of Har'Akir

I'll fix all three.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Skelni on April 03, 2023, 07:26:04 PM
The ol' Howling Axe

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1042503388241338460/1092590516165693530/image.png)

Effectives should probably be Effective
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on April 04, 2023, 06:35:39 PM
The ol' Howling Axe

Effectives should probably be Effective

I'll fix this, and the other typo in that text.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Maiyannah on April 08, 2023, 12:24:15 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/RVIk7ia.png)

We probably mean "bear" not "bare"
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on April 08, 2023, 01:21:05 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/RVIk7ia.png)

We probably mean "bear" not "bare"

I'll fix this one as well.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Skelni on April 09, 2023, 05:00:31 PM
A typo in the sense that it's referencing a mechanic improperly,

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1042503388241338460/1094728285352624320/image.png)

Claims to use three charges when really it's using five.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Doktor Scarecrow on April 09, 2023, 06:04:21 PM
In the description for the Heart of Ice, leather is spelt lether.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Maiyannah on April 10, 2023, 07:29:19 AM
Some superfluous newlines in the First Book of Ezra
(https://i.imgur.com/jSmjJVj.png)

"Stealer
of Breath"

"in the
Grand Scheme"
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on April 11, 2023, 12:31:14 PM
Some superfluous newlines in the First Book of Ezra

"Stealer
of Breath"

"in the
Grand Scheme"

In the description for the Heart of Ice, leather is spelt lether.

A typo in the sense that it's referencing a mechanic improperly,

Claims to use three charges when really it's using five.

I'll fix all three of those.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Dardonas on April 14, 2023, 11:48:41 PM
(https://i.gyazo.com/d57f1d13707cef54b255f7a774d85b4d.png)

Missing space between Greater Bull's Strength and (11).
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on April 15, 2023, 01:54:00 PM
(https://i.gyazo.com/d57f1d13707cef54b255f7a774d85b4d.png)

Missing space between Greater Bull's Strength and (11).

I'll fix this, thanks for reporting it.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Maiyannah on April 28, 2023, 06:52:49 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/iQMuj5o.png)

"imbeds" should be "embeds", additionally there is are superfulous spaces: "great strength   and"   as well as "will power" being one word.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: zDark Shadowz on May 03, 2023, 04:50:55 PM
Ticking Gnome's Stop-Pocketclock (Amulet)

"Weather" should be replaced with whether.

"Whether it be in heat of combat or simple race."

It's possible some of the phrasing may need to be redone as well, but I'm attributing that to a gnomish accent as it is a "spoken" description.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on May 05, 2023, 04:48:06 PM
Ticking Gnome's Stop-Pocketclock (Amulet)

"Weather" should be replaced with whether.

"Whether it be in heat of combat or simple race."

It's possible some of the phrasing may need to be redone as well, but I'm attributing that to a gnomish accent as it is a "spoken" description.

"imbeds" should be "embeds", additionally there is are superfulous spaces: "great strength   and"   as well as "will power" being one word.

I'll fix both. Thanks for reporting them.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: cheese tornado on May 11, 2023, 09:04:08 AM
Duration for Big Sky says "turn / level", just needs a 1 added to it:

(https://i.imgur.com/f1U4zPu.jpg)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on May 14, 2023, 01:43:39 PM
Duration for Big Sky says "turn / level", just needs a 1 added to it:

(https://i.imgur.com/f1U4zPu.jpg)

I'll fix this next update.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: remnar on May 15, 2023, 02:36:54 PM
in the native PC's thread
Falkovnia
classes section

there is this typo
(https://i.imgur.com/xT8lmAn.png)

it should probably be day to day survival
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on May 20, 2023, 12:23:02 PM
in the native PC's thread
Falkovnia
classes section

there is this typo
(https://i.imgur.com/xT8lmAn.png)

it should probably be day to day survival

This has been fixed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: bunnie on May 29, 2023, 02:26:19 AM
in the temple of thoth;
'whe' wheezing

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1005597683446206474/1112627343404564500/image.png)

Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: bunnie on May 30, 2023, 02:01:57 AM
the statue at the end of the terg ruins (vampire bit) is kinda wonky

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1108854218414104737/1112978642281185300/image.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on May 31, 2023, 12:30:03 PM
in the temple of thoth;
'whe' wheezing

the statue at the end of the terg ruins (vampire bit) is kinda wonky

I'll fix both, thanks.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Maiyannah on June 04, 2023, 08:41:44 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/ViuntmN.png)

The boxes are probably mis-processed linebreaks.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on June 04, 2023, 10:18:10 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/ViuntmN.png)

The boxes are probably mis-processed linebreaks.

I'll fix this as well. Thanks!
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Hemolymph on June 11, 2023, 12:33:48 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/SrmONzf.png)

More squares.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Anarcoplayba on June 11, 2023, 03:39:24 PM
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/966089072353374279/1117512636607774740/image.png)

Not exactly a typo, but I have a pet peeve with the descriptio "This dagger +1".
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on June 11, 2023, 08:01:24 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/SrmONzf.png)

More squares.

I'll fix this.

Not exactly a typo, but I have a pet peeve with the descriptio "This dagger +1".

I'll remove the reference.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: remnar on June 12, 2023, 04:44:41 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/tKbQHpk.png)

this should probably be venomous not poisonous
i think it is the same for large and young whips snakes
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on June 12, 2023, 07:52:50 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/tKbQHpk.png)

this should probably be venomous not poisonous
i think it is the same for large and young whips snakes

Thanks. I'll fix all related descriptions.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: bunnie on June 26, 2023, 09:35:21 PM
barovia - mt. baratak - peak (ice palace)
something tells me this fear check isn't quite right! probably copied from ghoul house

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1109958436894035968/1123063353208733728/image.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on June 27, 2023, 08:14:45 AM
the statue at the end of the terg ruins (vampire bit) is kinda wonky

in the temple of thoth;
'whe' wheezing

The boxes are probably mis-processed linebreaks.

More squares.

Not exactly a typo, but I have a pet peeve with the descriptio "This dagger +1".

this should probably be venomous not poisonous
i think it is the same for large and young whips snakes

These should all have been fixed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Silence is Violence on June 29, 2023, 02:06:18 AM
(https://i.imgur.com/QhAx4kU.png)

Big skellies got squares.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: bloodless on July 01, 2023, 04:38:59 PM
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1071975736925245610/1124801095676473364/image.png)

Should be "begin" there rather than "begins". Lower crypts spawn that shows up when you near.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: DM Erebus on July 02, 2023, 04:26:50 AM
barovia - mt. baratak - peak (ice palace)
something tells me this fear check isn't quite right! probably copied from ghoul house

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1109958436894035968/1123063353208733728/image.png)

will fix this
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on July 02, 2023, 12:10:52 PM
Should be "begin" there rather than "begins". Lower crypts spawn that shows up when you near.

Big skellies got squares.

I'll fix both of these.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Maiyannah on July 05, 2023, 06:28:34 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/piK8nHs.png)

Play-acting kid in Berez seems to need a capitalization.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: William Roberts on July 08, 2023, 01:48:36 PM
Seems like the best thread to mention that on the DM roster (https://www.nwnravenloft.com/forum/index.php?topic=1184.0), clicking on Cataclysm's name pulls up Brimstone's profile (i.e., the link is misdirected).
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: MAB77 on July 08, 2023, 03:07:33 PM
Seems like the best thread to mention that on the DM roster (https://www.nwnravenloft.com/forum/index.php?topic=1184.0), clicking on Cataclysm's name pulls up Brimstone's profile (i.e., the link is misdirected).

Fixed it, thanks.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: remnar on July 11, 2023, 10:43:12 PM
dont think this is correct

(https://i.imgur.com/fIKz5Qe.png)

should describe the spell, no?
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Maiyannah on July 12, 2023, 12:38:39 PM
In the Village:

(https://i.imgur.com/egT2F1K.png)

> Barovian Female Peasant

> He shrugs


Probably just copypaste error.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on July 13, 2023, 11:15:52 AM
dont think this is correct

(https://i.imgur.com/fIKz5Qe.png)

should describe the spell, no?

This was already fixed. You likely have an older version. Where did you find that scroll?

Play-acting kid in Berez seems to need a capitalization.

In the Village:

> Barovian Female Peasant

> He shrugs
Probably just copypaste error.

I'll fix both of these.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: remnar on July 13, 2023, 12:22:57 PM
text

I found the scroll in Thoth 2 days ago.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Alalaurealarialelia on August 22, 2023, 04:11:22 AM
Applying poison to a weapon via the "Dagger of Venom" always shows the text as "... applies poison to his weapon," regardless of the gender of the character using it.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on August 26, 2023, 11:24:56 AM
Applying poison to a weapon via the "Dagger of Venom" always shows the text as "... applies poison to his weapon," regardless of the gender of the character using it.

I'll fix this next hak update.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Skelni on September 08, 2023, 06:07:40 PM
Havelock's Most Helpful Hauberk

I'm just gonna say this is a typo, and should say "Mordentish" right? Or maybe Morentish sounds fine?

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1042503388241338460/1149828216920477726/image.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on September 08, 2023, 06:57:35 PM
Havelock's Most Helpful Hauberk

I'm just gonna say this is a typo, and should say "Mordentish" right? Or maybe Morentish sounds fine?

I'll fix this. Thanks for the report.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Skelni on September 10, 2023, 06:28:29 PM
Assassin bugs got some bugs in em. Square brackets []

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1042503388241338460/1150557666851172352/image.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: MAB77 on September 12, 2023, 03:38:23 PM
Assassin bugs got some bugs in em. Square brackets []

Spoiler: show
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1042503388241338460/1150557666851172352/image.png)


I'll fix this. Thanks for reporting.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on September 13, 2023, 08:58:23 PM
Havelock's Most Helpful Hauberk

I'm just gonna say this is a typo, and should say "Mordentish" right? Or maybe Morentish sounds fine?

Assassin bugs got some bugs in em. Square brackets []

These should now be fixed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Mordalynne on September 15, 2023, 01:11:05 PM
The description for the Lady's Clasp has a missing character:

This mushroom's bright color and inward folding cap make it resemble the claps
that adorn the cloaks of the fashionable women of Dementlieu. Its scent's sweet,
earthy nature quickly gave it the reputation of being able to lure romantic prospects. 

I assume this would be "clasps"?
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on September 15, 2023, 04:56:21 PM
The description for the Lady's Clasp has a missing character:

This mushroom's bright color and inward folding cap make it resemble the claps
that adorn the cloaks of the fashionable women of Dementlieu. Its scent's sweet,
earthy nature quickly gave it the reputation of being able to lure romantic prospects. 

I assume this would be "clasps"?

Thanks for the report. I'll fix this typo for the next hak update.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Ryujin on September 17, 2023, 10:32:46 AM
"Mountian Troll"

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/909107583934144543/1152975105241133066/image.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Madame Trousers Son on September 17, 2023, 10:37:07 AM
It's from the Mountia region. Everything else is just sparkling troll.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: herkles on September 17, 2023, 10:38:00 AM
"Mountian Troll"

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/909107583934144543/1152975105241133066/image.png)
Thanks. I'll fix this.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: SamDemonium on September 24, 2023, 10:32:40 AM
There seems to be an 'of' missing after 'bursts' on the Belt of Battle description.

(https://i.imgur.com/R0kma5H.png)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: MAB77 on September 24, 2023, 11:08:42 AM
There seems to be an 'of' missing after 'bursts' on the Belt of Battle description.

(https://i.imgur.com/R0kma5H.png)

Will take care of it. Thanks for reporting.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on October 03, 2023, 10:00:26 PM
"Mountian Troll"

There seems to be an 'of' missing after 'bursts' on the Belt of Battle description.

The description for the Lady's Clasp has a missing character:

This mushroom's bright color and inward folding cap make it resemble the claps
that adorn the cloaks of the fashionable women of Dementlieu. Its scent's sweet,
earthy nature quickly gave it the reputation of being able to lure romantic prospects. 

I assume this would be "clasps"?

Applying poison to a weapon via the "Dagger of Venom" always shows the text as "... applies poison to his weapon," regardless of the gender of the character using it.

These should now be fixed.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: InMyDarkestHours on January 01, 2024, 07:39:29 PM
*... has not been polished,

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/886743555131990076/1191541021566320742/image.png?ex=65a5d00d&is=65935b0d&hm=6248b4662ea4c1a0d5e8bfe0eb0fd39259559cc9acd7c8abdc36793072901c1c&)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on January 02, 2024, 12:38:52 PM
*... has not been polished,

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/886743555131990076/1191541021566320742/image.png?ex=65a5d00d&is=65935b0d&hm=6248b4662ea4c1a0d5e8bfe0eb0fd39259559cc9acd7c8abdc36793072901c1c&)

I'll fix that, thanks.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Hemolymph on January 06, 2024, 08:23:04 PM
(https://i.imgur.com/f04UZP8.png)

"...adorned with fresh rasberries."

(https://i.imgur.com/zeFHZax.png)

"The astounding thing about the book is that it was never truely written."
Also there's an extra space before "Instead,"
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on January 07, 2024, 04:16:44 PM
"...adorned with fresh rasberries."

"The astounding thing about the book is that it was never truely written."
Also there's an extra space before "Instead,"

I'll fix these.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Skelni on January 14, 2024, 03:45:14 AM
Doom Guard's got some Doom Square Brackets in it's description.

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1042503388241338460/1196011036764028988/image.png?ex=65b61313&is=65a39e13&hm=8b7a27190a57bbd96c1a4a192f1e2f6900740395b1dcc2fd27d2268238a74904&)
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: SamDemonium on January 19, 2024, 08:09:05 AM
If you fail a lore check on the tapestry in Thoth it gives this description. 'Tales' should be 'tails' no?


(https://i.imgur.com/rfLY2pL.png)

Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on January 20, 2024, 09:35:06 AM
Doom Guard's got some Doom Square Brackets in it's description.

If you fail a lore check on the tapestry in Thoth it gives this description. 'Tales' should be 'tails' no?

I'll fix both of these.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: Mordalynne on February 08, 2024, 07:27:09 AM
When you transition to Hazlan you are met with the following text:

(https://iili.io/J1A3n7R.png)

Please change "their" to "there" :-)

If I might also suggest changes so that it flows better?

"As you get off the Vistani's wagon there is a change in the air; A brief hint of spice and incense, of musty parchment, of smouldering leaves. This scent lingers but a moment and then is gone..."

/Edit: Actually, should "Sense" be "Scent"? Changed in the above also.
Title: Re: Typos!
Post by: EO on February 11, 2024, 08:25:17 AM
When you transition to Hazlan you are met with the following text:

(https://iili.io/J1A3n7R.png)

Please change "their" to "there" :-)

If I might also suggest changes so that it flows better?

"As you get off the Vistani's wagon there is a change in the air; A brief hint of spice and incense, of musty parchment, of smouldering leaves. This scent lingers but a moment and then is gone..."

/Edit: Actually, should "Sense" be "Scent"? Changed in the above also.

I'll fix it, thanks.